Ananya accepted Rohan’s challenge. She entered the dark haunted house alone without a torch. A red beam followed her as she took weighted steps.
She increased her pace when a white shadow followed her through the hallway.
She heard a loud shrill shriek and turn irritated, “you know what…your malls’s haunted house sucks, which way is the exit?”
“That way madam” answered the white shadow.
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I have been a bad girl off late running away from the blogosphere. But trust me it was all worth it be it Algarve, Portugal or the lavender fields of Avignon Province, France and the pristine beaches of Greece! So stay tuned to not miss them 🙂
The wanderess finally has the time to hold the pen. Am staying tuned 😀 I always fall for tiny tales and not that I love this, I would still want *read demand* a long fiction with the same magic wand..err… pen 🙂 Btw, knowing Rohan I would so want him to be behind the white shadow. That said, I loved the sentence you chose to end with 🙂 As always, perfecto Ani!
You know Rohan too well it seems 🙂 of course the demand is fully considered and in the making…the five sentence fiction is for impatient Geminines! and can’t be better than you liking it 🙂
Hahaha… good one!
thank you Deepakji 🙂
Scary lines accompanied by the scary image. Your fiction makes an impact on the reader.
horror has to have that kind of an impact 🙂
Hahaha.. Such a wonderful, short and sort of spooky tale 😛 Loved the crisp suspense 😀
thank you so much Saumy, spooked you hehe!
Ahha….that really sucks….? Wouldn’t want that chill running down my spine .So you have been traveling lately – will wait for your posts ?
hahah….scared you that much? yes travel posts take time on pictures and content Sunaina, I will work on them soon now 🙂
Friendly ghost?
hahah in a mall yes 🙂
Such an impactful piece of fiction! Loved the suspense you created. So glad you’re back in the blogosphere! 🙂
thank you Maitreni for such a warm welcome…and liking my work 🙂
Hmmm. . . I am staying tuned for further updates.
Jitendra Mathur
hahah…sure, there is no sequel 🙂
That is a nice spooky short fiction. 🙂
thanks Raj, glad you liked it 🙂
Hmmm. I am staying tuned for further updates.
Jitendra Mathur
And as she turned? Is there more? Nice one Shweta. Has me thinking of so many endings.
write a sequel….ill come running to read Ami 🙂
The short tale is interesting. But I don’t like ghosts.
ah..who likes ghosts Tessy but I love horror movies 🙂
Obviously nice one, whenever you write “Five sentence fiction” i read it very slowly to enjoy every line, i know there will be something mind blowing twist. every time i liked the twists a lot.
wow thank you for such a nice compliment Jyotirmoy 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂
short nice and spooky
thank you Anagha 🙂
He he.. So scary 😉
you are laughing and calling it scary that I like Anjali hehe 🙂
Though, it is a short one but leaves a lot for the imagination. Good work!
Hahaha….that was great! I get spooked even by the cheapest horror movies….even horror theme parks or shows, I don’t venture! Waiting for your posts from your recent travels to all these exotic places!
Hahaha! Love it 🙂 I definitely didn’t see that coming!
caught you unawares…thats awesome 🙂
Bingo! Nailed it so well.
thank you so much 🙂