The Offer – Five sentence fiction

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She had shiver run down her spine as she foundย Pinky lay in a pool of blood, her eyes fell on the phone that flashed a message “new role offer, call urgently!”

She had enjoyed every moment of stardom with Pinky who tasted glamour and success as a child artist at a very young age.

When depression gripped Pinky at a tender age of 14 asย offers dwindled as she no longer fitted in the cute child category or was too young to play romantic roles, she stood with her hand in hand.

She wanted to stop as she picked the pair of scissors to cut her baby fat, she wanted to cajole her that offers were just a step ahead.

She, none other than Pinky’s soul, stood there helpless looking at the message, a new opportunity lying next to her dead body.

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63 Replies to “The Offer – Five sentence fiction”

  1. Brrr!! That was heart-wrenching Shweta! Body image issues are so sad, when people give so much importance to it….very sad but a bitter truth, especially in the glamour industry.

  2. I know its really sad ..These days everybody is obsessed with looks and are ready to do anything for it. Body shaming needs to be stopped ! You conveyed your message in short and simple manner!

  3. This is so scary! Pushing children into the limelight at such an early age is also very scary – as the trend these days with all the reality shows. And body image – oh my, that is a biggie!! ๐Ÿ™

  4. Oh my God! This is very painful. One needs to constantly watch children’s behaviour during this age of transition. This indeed is a scary but story to ponder. You are gifted by God Shweta! Very well written.

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